Thecharacterizationofthemalecharacterisnotverydetaillypresented.PerhapsthisisChapter2ofthestory,allthenecessarydescriptionsofthemalecharacterhavealreadygiveninChapter1,sowedonotknowwhatexactlyhelookslike.Ifthewriterhasgivenalltheseinthefirstchapterwithanintroductionofthebackgroundofthischaracter,thenwewillacceptsuchabriefpresentation.Butifthewriterhasnotdoneso,thenweconsideritisnecessaryforhimtoputmoredetaileddescriptionsofthecharcter,forexample,howdoesheexactlylooklike,howtallheis,whyheissoattractivetogirls,hisfacefeatures,hisstrengthandweaknessetc.

    HemaymissthechancetointroducetothereadersadescriptionoftheOperaHouseinSydney.WepresumethewritermayhavegonetoAustraliaandhavevisitedtheOperaHouse.ButwereadersmayhavetheintereststoknowwhattheworldknownOperaHousereallylooklike.Itisabitdisappointedthatthewriterfailstodoso.

    Asamatteroffact,suchinadequatedescriptionsofplace,charactersandfeelings,seemtobetheweaknessofthewriterinwritingthisnovel.

    Wearenotgivenaclearpictureofwhatthehotelreallylooklike.Isitgrandorjustamotel?IsitsituatedattheheartofSydneyorattheoutskirtofthecity.Nothingdetailshavebeengiven.

    Itisuntilthedescriptionsofthesexgamestakenplaceatthehotel\'sroomthatbuildsuptheatmosphereandclimaxofthischapter.

    Duetothedifficultyinbooking,thethreecharactersareforcedtostayinoneroom.Suchanarrangementgivesthewritertopresentaromanticyethornytasteofthestory.Threepersonsinonesingleroom?Whatwillhappentothem?Howwillthemalecharacterhandlethesetwogirls?Whatwillthetwogirlsd